无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家都尝试过写作吧，借助写作也可以提高我们的语言组织能力。范文怎么写才能发挥它最大的作用呢？接下来小编就给大家介绍一下优秀的范文该怎么写，我们一起来看一看吧。
短文改错课件篇一
（一）i am interested at swimming very first, i went swimming just to keep my dream was to swim for my country in the practicing in the pool is very bored, but i still work very hard in order to realize my e my hard work, i have already come first in much important the competitions, i’ve made lot of friends and we’re very ’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改错
（二）one day, little tony went to a shopping center with his was very saw a toy on a shop liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were was scared and begun to cry.a woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a minutes saw said,” how nice to see you again!dad and i were terrible worried.” tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改错
（三）last summer vacation, i went on a school trip with mine visited a farm in a took a bus for a while, and then we walked saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the farmers were worked hard in the farm when we of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful was really interesting and at the same time, i learned a lot about an excited school trip!
（四）i’ve been playing baseball for six year and i’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball strict coach wants us do our best when we are it’s not always about also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.i take advice he gives me and bring them to my people say girls can’t play that doesn’t get me d, it makes me play more harder.i want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!
（五）my uncle drove his car meet his he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the opened his eye and answered, “half past eight.” with a “thank you!” a woman a short while this happened my uncle wrote “i don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.a few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “hi, young man.i can tell you that time it ’s nine o’clock now.”
（六）when i began my senior high school years, i had difficulty to learning english.i dared not speak english in the public because of my poor pronounce.i could not get high marks, but i always used bad of be laughed at, i never put up my hand answer questions in my english teacher miss li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my her help, i became interest in english and finally got high li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改错
（七）dear tim, how time flies!it has been a month since you go to is everything going? next weekend i will take part in a national english speaking competition to be holding in will be a good chance to improve your english and make friends with students from other part of right now i’m not sure that i can remember all the words for a , i will hope i can get a good result.i am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time , li hua
（八）as a service dog, sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition i condition can be something bad happen, sandy will tell my parents course, i help take care of sandy, too.i feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere i i don’t bring sandy to me, he will get he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and i went to the was upset in the whole never stopped look for i got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.i love his dog very much.4
短文改错课件篇二
短文改错
高考英语短文改错题要求考生判断一篇短文中十行(自1995年以来)文字是否有错，如果有错误就将其改正。
此题型旨在测试考生发现、判断并改正短文中错误的能力，以及考查考生准确运用词法、句法、行文逻辑等的综合能力。
本题型侧重考查考生的词汇和语法基础知识，但并不是单纯的知识检测，而是考查考生在阅读的过程中运用语法知识解决实际问题的能力。
纵观近几年高考短文改错，不难发现其设题方式比较固定：正确为1个，多词或缺词共计3个，错词为6个，其比例为1：3:6。
下面引用近几年的高考题来分析一下此题的三种错误类型：多词、缺词和错词。
一、多词
1.多冠词
(l)suddenly,i caught a sight of my english teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可数名词，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意为“看见”。
(2)for e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am为不可数名词，泛指时前面不用冠词。
【知识拓宽】
(1)不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词。
modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and„
(2)与by连用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名词前不用冠词。
by bike骑自行车，by sea由海路，乘船
(3)有些名词(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)与相应介词连用，表示进行和这些词直接相关的活动时，前不用冠词。
___ _去上学，_______坐牢，_______在吃饭
(4)球类运动、棋类游戏前，不用冠词。
___ _打篮球，_______下棋
(5)mo。t副词作“非常”解时，前面不用定冠词the。
she is most pretty.她非常漂亮。
(6)。或though引导让步状语从句，构成倒装结构，前置的单数名词前不用任何冠词。
child as he is,he knows a lot.虽然他只是孩子，知道的却很多。
2.多介词
(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit china in next yeal
(2)we practice for three times every week..(3)so l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作时间状语的名词短语前多了介词。
(4)„but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意为“谈到„„”，是及物动词短语，后须接介词宾语，但根据本句语境，此处不必接宾语，故去掉about。
【知识拓宽】
(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名词词组直接充当时间状语，前面不用介词。
(2)有些动词在汉语中是不及物动词，在英语中却是及物动词，由于受汉语影响，可能多一个介词。
serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with tom in amatch(画线介词多余)
(3)有些表示地点的副词，其意义中已包含to，如果再加to，则多余。
on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(画线介词均多余)
(4)有些副词或介词词组后加另一个介词，构成复合介词，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。同样，有些动词短语是“动词十介词”结构，若后面没有介词宾语，介词则多余。
①if you won’t go，i'll go instead of.(画线介词多余)
②she listened to but heard nothing(画线介词多余)
(5)有些动词或形容词后接名词或代词时，须加一个介词，但接从句时，必须去掉介词。
①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(画线介词多余)
②i am sorry for that he won't come(画线介词多余)
3.词义重叠
(1)whenever i see them l will often think of myenglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them这一时间状语从句后再用often显得重复，应去掉。
(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意为“整个周末”，再加上all，词义重叠。
【知识拓宽】
(1)有些词受汉语影响，多一副词或介词，造成词义重叠。
return back回来，repeat again重复，flee away逃走，enter into进入，blue color蓝色，stop down停下来，raiseup举起来，unpack open打开
(2)定语从句中的一个名词，已由关系代词取代，再用其替代词是多余的。
i do remember you having apologized to the old lady imet her last week
(3)单音节的形容词或副词比较等级加-er.-est，多音节加more、most，但二者不能同时重叠使用。
as a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出现冗言现象
(l)today l visited the smiths-my first time visit toan american family.【解析】本句中的first修饰visit，visit此处为名词，意为“我的第一次访问”，time多余。
(2)now i can't watch much television,but„【解析】根据上下文，此处应是“我根本不能看电视”，因此受汉语影响，多了much，造成冗言。
【知识拓宽】
(1)状语从句与主句之间多一并列连词。
①though he tried his best, but he failed.②the more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充当状语的介词短语与主句之间多一关系代词或关系副词。
①in the last five years that they have climbed churches一②„in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充当状语的分词与主句之间多一并列连词。
sitting down,and he began to work.(4)从属连词后多一个that。
she was absent from the meeting because that she was ill(5)复合宾语前多一个that。
i found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多词
(1)i was used to watch it every night.【解析】此处属于used to do与be used to两个固定搭配的误用，应去掉was，取“过去常常”之意。
(2)„in any other words,iam only a child.【解析lin other words为固定搭配，意为“换句话说”，而any other意为“任何别的„„”，与本文上下文不符。
6.行文逻辑上多词first, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是刚开始向别人讲述自己的故事，故只能说something，而不能加more。
二、缺词
1.名词前缺限定词
(1)each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the 【解析】此处应加上the，特指“球队的队长”。
(2)the day before the speech contest^englishteacher talked to 【解析】根据上下文分析，此处english teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英语老师，故加上my，表达一个更确切的概念。
(3)i'1i take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish rful time为固定搭配，意为“祝某人玩得愉快”。
【知识拓宽】
(1)在“so+形容词十可数名词单数”结构中，名词前不能缺a或an。
this is so good a book that we will buy it.=this is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定时，前面不能缺a，意为“一些”。
如a little water，但是“每隔几分钟”应说成every fewminutesa
(3)有些不可数名词(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一种”“一个“一份”时，应加上a或an。
work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏复数”表示一家人时，the不能省。
the browns like to go skating.(5)表示“两者之中比较„„的一个”时，比较级前应加the。
he is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可数名词不可单独使用，前面应有限定词，如his,that,tom's,the,a等。
when we walked to the car, bill smiled and shook^2.缺动词不定式符号to(1)i'd like very much^come but i have anexamination on monday 【解析】like后面不能直接加动词，需加to，构成固定搭配“would like to do”，意为“想做„„”。
(2) will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的状语，不定式符号to不可省。
【知识拓宽】
(1)不定式作后置定语，不定式符号to不能省。
but then there are always more mysteriesalook into:_____to
(2)-般说来，两个实义动词不能并列使用，中间常用to连接。
①7ihe world health()rganization and other organizationsare workingaimprove health all over the world_____to
②i had always wanteda retum to the village _____to
(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等动词变成被动结构时，充当主语补足语的不定式不能省去to。
little tom was made to do heavy work
(4)为了避免重复前面的动词，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符号to。
we wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to
3.缺系动词
(l)neya eager to imow everything about china：.'were【解析】eager为形容词，必须加系动词构成系表结构。
(2)what^ your favourite sport?is【解析】本句缺谓语动词，应加is。
(3)i'd like to^ your pen-friend, /become【解析】本句考查i'd like to do结构，根据上下文，必须加上系动词。
【知识拓宽】
(1)由于受汉语语法规则的影响，有些形容词作表语时，常常缺少系动词。
she is afraid of her boss.(2)在被动结构中，由于缺少助动词，变成了主动语态，造成错误。
„and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick 4.缺介词(l)we must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of为固定短语，意为“而非，而不是”，后接宾语。
(2)„but the others spent a lota time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定习语，意为“许多，大量”，后加宾语。
【知识拓宽】
改错题对介词的考查，重点是一些固定搭配，再如：
wheni have free timei go^along walk..for，因此，同学们在学习和复习中应牢记一些固定搭配。
5.缺连词in one class,l learned^ it 【解析】本句因缺连词而造成句子成分残缺，只有加上why，句子的意义才完整。
【知识拓宽】
(1)在汉语中，分句与分句之间往往不用连词，但在英语中却不行。
it began to rain,^ they had to stop
(2)受母语影响，几个同类词并列连用时，它们之间往往缺一连词。
cdi told mother, father, sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time i ②he looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引导的主语从句置于句首时，that常常不能省。
that light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引导同位语从句的连词that，when等常不可省。
(dthe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短语中，第二个连词不能少。
he walks as if/though he were drunk
三、错词
1.可数名词单复数误用
(l)they were eager to know everything about chinaand asked me lots of question
(2)we study quite a few subject, such as maths,chinese, english and physics.(3)we practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on tv together.(4)she said that she and my schoolmate' me success,.(5)„so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___
(6)„and many happy return of the day_____
(7)i used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知识拓宽】
对名词单复数的考查是高考的热点之一，几乎每年考查一处。因此，为了对名词错误判断准确，应该：
(1)弄清名词是可数名词还是不可数名词。
we stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water
(2)掌握好可数名词复数的变化规则。
there are branch library in many villages libraries
(3)要熟练运用名词的所有格。
2.时态误用
(l)we havea good tinte talking and laughing
(2)i learn about you from my english teacher, d
(3)i was a member of our school football team am
(4)i arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was
(5)i remembered her words and calm down calmed
(6)they did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知识拓宽】
动词时态是短文改错考查的热点之一，一般说来每年考查一处，而且近几年高考主要考查现在时与过去时的使用，再如：i had an examination on monday
3.非谓语动词误用
(l)it was very kind of them to meet the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive
(2)i look forward to hear from you soon hearing
(3)play football not only makes us grow up...playing
(4)i was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch tv demands very little ng【知识拓宽】
(1)由以上考例可见，v.-mg形式作主语、宾语或状语是考查的热点。
cdi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor ing②after learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to ng
(2)过去分词与现在分词的区别是另一考查热点。此时重点要看分词与主语或逻辑主语的关系。
①after an hour or so, we began to feel ened②„but now l am interesting in sted(3)被动语态中的过去分词误用成动词原形。
books may be keep for four (4)掌握好动词不定式带to与不带to的差异。
(5)有些动词后接不定式，有些动词后接动名词，应分别牢记这些动词。
4.主谓不一致
(1)playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and
(2)now my picture and the prize is hanging in 【知识拓宽】
(1)谓语动词的单复数一般取决于前面主语的单复数。
anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow
(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，..-等并列连词连接两个主语时，谓语动词的单复数应采取就近一致原则。
(3)there be结构中，谓语动词也应采取就近一致原则。
but then there is always more mysteries to look
(4)注意把集合名词(如family，class，team等)和不定代词(如all，none等)放在具体语境中，判断其谓语动词的单复数。
5.代词不一致
(l)the smiths did his best to make me feel at
(2)and they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the (3)now someone at home reads ne/everybody【知识拓宽】
(1)根据上下文判断，出现了代词不一致。
①1 felt that it helped me understand how the ②they have been to europe many timeswe
(2)倾向于考查学生对不定代词、形容词性物主代词、名词性物主代词以及代词的主格与宾格等诸方面知识的掌握与运用能力。
and i can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me
(3)人称代词性别上的误用也是常见的错误形式之一。
6.连词误用
(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thati would win or notwhether【解析】it为形式主语，whether l would win or not是真正的主语，意为“我是否能赢”。
(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor 【解析】句意为：看起来我的父母亲把我当成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者为选择关系而非并列关系，故将and改为or。
(3)it is a very important exam buti can't afford tofail /so【解析】此处应是并列或因果关系，而非转折关系。
【知识拓宽】
(1)正确掌握各连词的含义及其在从句中的应用。
①„because i felt that they helped me understandwhat the world ②most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if
(2)熟练应用表示并列、选择、转折、因果等关系的连词：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①she was smiling but nodding at ②therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter r
(3)弄清whether和if的含义及用法区别。
„and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to
7.关系代词与关系副词误用
i live inbeijing,where is the capital of 【解析】此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词which作主语。
【知识拓宽】
(1)正确区分关系代词之间的区别，尤其是that和which的区别。
„in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be
(2)正确区分关系代词与关系副词的区别，并掌握它们的用法。
however,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter
8.词性误用
(1)also the sport teaches us the important ance【解析】本句应该用名词importance作动词teach的直接宾语。
(2)unfortunate, there are too many people in unately【解析】此处应该用副词unfortunately作状语，意为“不幸的是”。
(3)after learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to cal【解析】。eem为系动词，后面应接形容词作表语。
【知识拓宽】
词性误用指的是动词与名词混淆，副词与形容词混淆等。这就要求我们在平时学习中重视词性及各类词在句中的基本功能。再如：
i'm sure we'iihave 8 wonderfully time ful
9.限定词误用
(1)today i visited the smiths-my first visit to aamerican 【解析】american为元音音素开头的单词，故应用部定冠词 an
(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，„the【解析】same意为“同样的”，前面应加定冠词the。
10.近义词混用they did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family侧重指“家庭这个结构或家里的人。，而home则侧重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”应用athome。
【知识拓宽】
在英语中，有许多同义词、近义词和反义词，在平时学习中应抓好基础，牢记每一个词的基本含义。再如：.uncle ben will alsogo back for 总之，平时学习中应加强对基础知识的积累，熟练掌握高考词汇、基本词法、句法，同时还应加强阅读能力的训练。因为，较快的阅读速度、较好的语感和牢固的基础知识是做好短文改错的重要前提。平时训练短文改错时，不应只是为了做题而做题，而应善于总结、摸索答题的规律。
参考答案
一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess
三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes
短文改错课件篇三
短文改错专练：march 29th, dear diary, i’m writing this at my ’s almost midnight and i have to getting up early tomorrow, but i can’t sleep.i’m thinking about my future!every day, my parents asks me, “what do you want to be when you grow?” the problem is: i don’t know!my mom always says, “be a doctor!” and she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of i’m really bad at biology at the dad says, “be a pilot!” is he crazy? he knew i hate flying!
now i’m getting tiring, so i’m going to bed.i can think about my future in bed.i get my best ideas when i’m lain down.i have known my friend rebecca for a long firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so i invited rebecca over to my listened to the music together and soon became best years ago, rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with is spent three wonderful weeks in a little a and i loved walking along the beautifully took a lot of photos and had a lot of year, rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each joe, how are you? thanks to your post — good to know when you’re ok.i’ve got news too.i’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and anna, a friend from ’re going to stay on a farm with four days!we’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.i’m sure i’ll love know how crazy i am about the animals!i want to learn all about the cows or the horses.i hope i will have some times to go walking in the hills, , right now i’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!i’ll write to you when i get back to telling you about my , 4 nadia people had always been interested in interest may have begun with the honey what bees the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made admired the way bees seemed to working so languages even developed expressions about people working like english, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.now scientists has a new reason to be interested in have discovered that bees able to communicate with each ch has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many day afternoon, i took the no.6 bus to go was crowded on the bus, and i had listened to music by my ly i saw the name of the bus stop that i should get off, so i got off the bus in i arrived home, i realized that i had left my bag on the id card and ten books were in the bag.i was worried and eager to finding it, so i went to the bus companies for ate, at the lost and found, i see my bag.i wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his a good man!
i read an interested piece of news on a newspaper ing to professor richard wiseman, only less than a quarter of the british achieved their new year goals because they do it in the wrong studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of new year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” the reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking weekends, i went shopping by was a sunny day and i feel very i had bought anything i needed, i went to the bus stop to take a unately, there were too much people at the bus it was my turn to get on, there was no room.i had to wait the next ly, it started to rain.i had no choice but to call a way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.i was filled with angry when i saw an emptier bus go y, i decided to walk home in a an unlucky day!
my name is li hua and i wanted to be class monitor.i am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.i enjoy serving onally, i have vary interests.i love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.i am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.i am confident that i can do the job a student myself, firstly, i will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their those students who is falling behind, i will find ways to help them to catch ly, i will serve as a bridge among teachers and y, i will arrange parties so we can relax.i believe i am the right person to this sarah, i’m writing because i want to apologize to what i did last week.i’m really sorry.i know we said 8:30, and i would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.i was late because my watch broke and i didn’t know what the time it you see, i would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t i have to walk because i’d missed the b then i fell over and my trousers got dirty, so i had to go home and get i decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.i would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile , i hope you aren’t too angrier with to hear you , jack
today my classmate and i went to a farm for a trip.i get up at six o’clock and we set off by the bus, some of us sang, and some of us all had good hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same , we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open y, we went home at half past gh all of us was tired, our trip was really very more my father and mother has been wanting me to study think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an english-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be er, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter er, my good friend, zhang hua doesn’t agree with thought my english is too limited to communicate with s, the cost is too much for his my opinions, i should continue to study in long as i study hard at now, i’ll make great achievements in the ising informs consumers about newer products available on the gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and there is one serious problems with information are actually very often tells us the products’ benefits but hides its ising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same grandfather had had enough of his was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.a week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving decided he will never give her away n, the arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional means they live on much the same way as their ancestors who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the s and beliefs have changed very fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than are passing on with little changes from one generation to the changes do take cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of southwest asia and north uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling by which they saw, they phoned the the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their parts in recreation activities help us keep are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching tv, playing chess, or going to i think we’d better to have more outdoor students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a brains also need changes to make it smart and a word, exercise is good for the sandra, you’ll never guess where i’m writing this email.a cave!you know we’re on holidays in , we spend a few days in barcelona had a good time there, though one day i didn’t feel very good.i think i ate too much ice cream the day , when i left barcelona, we came to spend a few days in r, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!then the hotel owner said, “why don’t try the cave hotels?” we thought he were in caves? but there we are and it’s ’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to ’re never going to have enough time to explore for care!
ben
my uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite decided to set up climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch afternoon they heard lots of shouting they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on ately, the fire was putting turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the mas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to do we think of the other people when we sat down to our christmas dinner? of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we forget to think of the sick and the whole idea of christmas has complete a shame!
a thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on g up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the ore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t ally, my parents returned to and found the thief in our my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a it was too late and she was father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21
nowadays more and more students were found cheating in copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile ng in exams will cause some worse one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the how can cheating in exams be stopped? on my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their jack, i’m glad to learn that you will come beijing to learn about chinese culture as an exchange the moment, i am studying english in my school but i always get better grades in my class.i’m good at the spoken english, so i’m sure i will communicate with you , my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.i believe you will be one of their friend ore, i invite you to live in my home during you stay in beijing.i’m willing to helping you as much as i wishes!
yours, li hua
短文改错课件篇四
mei was a very famous pop singer in hong er her mother, she began to perform in the age of the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first song “bad girl” made her following years see play in many movies and made many of her songs very was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good sars hit hong kong in 2004, they zed several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on hong people to bravely face the , anita died of cancer december, brave and the beautiful lady will always be ered by joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． but after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, man wrote to him, “dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as i have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” after he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．
day john goes to work by always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ the report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ he got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ his boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ the first day when i went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for i am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the ordering two french dishes and some food, 79．___________ i began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ ile, i looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.i wrote something improper down 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.i looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!i realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was i wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less were 77． play together happily all daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she a way it 79．
is like having two children in the of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． he always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wife is also happy because of 84． i have given up dog doesn’t like the smell.85．
6.i went shopping with my have a lot of things to 1._________ buy drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the hour late, we came back 3._________ to the it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the we asked policeman for was 5._________ glad to help us.a few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“how are 7._________ you doing with my car ” we were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the you think we did then 9._________ we had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the it is too you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ r, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good you can see every 83.______ coin has two 'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______
worried, i have accepted your letter and i'm glad to give you some 76.__________ in all, don't be students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several , 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence , 80.__________ read as much as are many things can't be 81.__________ must see it in books many you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly , in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read y, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good luck for you in your cousin and i usually stay out late with some friends on saturday evenings, left grandpa alone at home.71.___ it was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in second world fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be and then we asked grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ is known to all that the internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ on it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our r, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ ---and ---saw ---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she t—concerts ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really 改为 train 77.去掉 piece。 改为 passes。ant 前加 an 改为 so。81.此行无错。 改为 waited。 改为 late。 改为 with。ance 改为 important。
--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 84 waiting ⑸ 76．there改为where 77．alone改为lonely 78．days改为day 79．used改为used to 80．all改为both 81．but改为and 82．easy改为easier 83．无错 84．去掉of 85．smoke改为smoking 改为had 去掉 改为later 4.正确 后加a 改为 minutes 改为what sing改为surprised 后加do 改为 say —in —travelin9 tably--comfortable --if --safe 81.正确 —is 后加not 84.去掉to --and ⑻ed→received →of ulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.对 后加that →them →so 84.去掉to →to
-leaving -neither -freezing -stayed 后面加the -but/yet 去掉 -which -on ⑽ →it →in →and ⌒much as r →besides 82.∨ →kinds ng →watch →leaving
⑾ ed→received 77.去掉more, e后加of, →another →said →or两,三天用two or three →soon fast指动作的迅速,soon指时间“尽快地”.84.√ y→happy
⑿ 76.√→are →feel ore→however 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to →playing →as →grades“分数”, →in
⒀ →had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him ers →shoulder → taken 后加 not →i n后加to ⒁ g—called —or ——died 6.√—both 8.去掉not 前加a —dance
